Waiting for the bus
Hello everyone. This is my first sonnet so if you all could please critique it and give me some advice that would be great. thanks.Waiting for the busDark gloomy grey horizons cloud my view,of...
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The idea is interesting. It's ruined by poetical overkill, though. And by bad metre. So there's too much distraction. I just don't get the picture sufficiently. I'm sidetracked - and I hate it,...
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This is a difficult piece to crit because it's difficult to know what's going on.I have figured out that you're waiting for a bus... it's raining... you have a companion...hmmm, that's about it, as...
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